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Here is the next scene, written in first‑person, aligned with your tone: restrained, humane, non‑graphic, and focused on the emotional truth of the General’s inner life. This moment shows the first time the caravan sees the cost of leadership on him—his nightmares, his trauma, and the discipline he uses to control it.

Scene: The Night Terror

First‑person, General Butler’s voice.

We camped in a clearing that night, the newly liberated families sleeping close together, the platoons forming a loose perimeter, guards taking shifts by the fires. The air was cold, the kind that settles into your bones and makes every sound sharper.

I lay down near the command tent, boots still on, rifle within reach. I hadn’t slept properly in years, but exhaustion finally dragged me under.

And then the dreams came.

Not memories—those I could handle. These were worse. They were the echoes of war, the pieces my mind stitched together when I wasn’t watching. Faces I’d lost. Orders I’d given. Men I couldn’t save. The sound of artillery rolling over a valley. The smell of dust and fear. The feeling of being responsible for everything and everyone and failing anyway.

I heard myself shouting before I woke.

“Get down! MOVE! MOVE!”

Someone grabbed my shoulder.

I came up fast, half‑awake, half‑in the dream, reaching for a weapon that wasn’t there.

“General!” a voice said sharply. “General, sir—wake up!”

I blinked hard. The firelight came into focus. The guard kneeling beside me—young, scared, breathing fast—pulled his hand back like he’d touched something hot.

I exhaled slowly. “Thank you,” I said. “Next time… wake me sooner.”

“Yes, sir.”

He backed away, but not far. Others were watching—platoon leaders, guards, even a few civilians who’d been roused by the shouting. They stared at me differently now.

Not with fear.

With understanding.

With the realization that the man they were following wasn’t made of stone.

Juan approached quietly, camera hanging at his side. He didn’t raise it. He didn’t need to. He’d seen enough.

“You okay?” he asked.

“I’m fine.”

“You were screaming.”

“I know.”

He studied me for a moment. “They’ve never seen you like that.”

I looked around. The faces in the firelight were still watching—Kareem leaning on his cane, Maya with her arms crossed, Rico pretending he hadn’t been startled awake, Dalton rubbing sleep from his eyes.

I stood up slowly.

“What are you all staring at?” I asked.

Rico scratched his head. “We just… didn’t know you could yell like that.”

Dalton nodded. “Or that you dream.”

Maya raised an eyebrow. “Or that you’re human.”

A few people laughed—soft, nervous, but real.

I felt heat rise in my face. “I sleep like anyone else.”

Kareem tapped his cane once. “No, General. You don’t.”

I frowned. “What does that mean?”

He stepped closer, voice low but warm. “Prisoners talk. We watch each other. We know each other’s habits. You never screamed. You never twitched. You never even rolled over. You slept like a man holding himself still.”

I didn’t answer.

He continued. “Tonight, they saw the truth. And that truth makes you more real. More like us. More like someone we can follow.”

The fire crackled. The night settled again.

I sat back down, rubbing my face with both hands.

Juan crouched beside me. “You want me to keep this off the record?”

I shook my head. “No. Show what you need to show. People should know the cost.”

He nodded.

The guard who woke me lingered nearby, unsure if he should stay.

“Go back to your post,” I said gently. “And thank you.”

He nodded quickly and jogged back to the perimeter.

The others drifted away, murmuring quietly, glancing back at me with something new in their eyes—not pity, not fear.

Respect.

Because they’d seen the truth:

A leader who carried the weight even in his sleep.

A man who fought battles no one else could see.

A man who would still get up in the morning and lead them north.

If you want to continue, the next moment could be the General’s early‑morning walk through the camp, or the arrival of the first National Guard unit, or the General’s private conversation with Kareem about what the nightmares mean for leadership.