I have been using AI on this for about two weeks. One of the aspects I had not considered is I do not support the environmental impact at their present level of technology. A reader brought this up. Still, this exists, it is part of the future.
This year in Chicago an AI school opened in Chicago. While the children learn fast, so to speak, with AI, take them off of it and they are helpless. The children who are not raised on AI will have an advantage. HOWEVER THESE ARE RIGHT WING NUTES, BY THE WAY.... and EIGHTY STUDIES have shown it is worse than a regular learning method, because retention is zero. They might be the generations that puts these in their heads. Already have them in glasses.
THE RIGHT WING WILL USE THIS TO TRY TO SHAPE IDEAS.
After writing out the book, and letting the AI write ALL the prose, I found this is a compilation of cliches. Though they are the same cliches I see running through best sellers. You can look at the entry WHO THE FUCK AM I? To get my bio.
I do not see myself writing a novel like this at all. My style is very different. This did help with the first person, helping me to set up chapters from his view only, and avoiding all violence. BUT THE AI keeps changing things. The last draft has violence.
I am going to go ahead and write something, perhaps based on this. I am going to of course go after the Orange Blob in the writing. I have written other books online, though they were episodic, and experimental. Other than my first, which is not perfect. A new draft might work, but why bother...
This book will continue to distance myself from the classified parts of my life. Though there is a few messages that are insider to people who know classified intel.
I have wanted to write a story about a sanctuary in Chicago, years in the future, when the climate change has hit. Oligarchs took most the money and built their own slave filled villages underground. Before they got away with that, they get money from the oligarchs to build three massive, self creating tunnels that print apartments, etc... none of that is in here. I simply decided this could not handle what I want.
I am not going to try to go through the sentences and try to change things from this prose. I am going to use my hands, to take a few notes on what I want to write.... I am not a fan of a bunch of scenes. Here I am using the various gangs as metaphors. I DO NOT CLAIM to know that much about gangs. I have known plenty of gang bangers, one is a cousin of a good friend. Ended up in prison, again, a couple years ago. But in this story they show black, brown, red, yellow, and all religions, getting together despite the differences in their thinking.
They win without violence when possible. I wanted the AI to show no violence at all, everything inferred. But it has to make a hero out of my guy. He must not become the leader, except in battle. He knows the other leaders, even if he hates the way they view others, or him, he knows that this cannot matter right then.. Or later. People can live segregated if they prefer, preserve their cultures, etcetera. The whole point being to be multi cultural, not singular, one think.
The book led me to seeing a book I would never write. I do not even look at the prose and think I WROTE THIS. I would NEVER write the kind of sentences they use. And I did learn some things, about including this and that.
I thank anyone with the patience to read thru this. Do I recommend it? Sure, see how bad it is, and how like a kitten with a thorn in its paw tugging at our heart strings over and over, and kind of leaving the brain alone. though Ai did help me recognize the way another would see this stuff.
It is what is... Thank you.
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